storytelling

ive created my first story on this forum for my character Jordan Baker, regarding my science and tactical officers. I should have written something long ago but like i said ive been real busy with work and i just couldnt think of what to write about. If anyone has any advice on the actual story telling i would love to hear it. ive read every story on here and im impressed with everyones different writing styles. i thought it about time to join you guys.

I can't wait to read it.

I have read your story.. I have only one thing to say I'm afraid..



I loved it. Good work, <3

thank you i really appreciate it, it took me like weeks to come up with that paragraph lol, you are a great writer monroe, and z'hai you build a picture in my mind with all your works, bravo guys XD

I don't like writing tbh. I panic way to much when I do.
Your good Jordan, you just need to open your mind and go with the flow.

& Z's amazing tbh.

Like I always say, I'm only as good as those that inspire me. Jordan, you and Monroe are excellent writers.

I get where your coming from Z with the people around you inspiring you and stuff.
I mean, I'm such an inspiration .

But nah, if the people around you are good then it makes you better plus the back and forth of a few peoples ideas make a character better.