Episode 1: Christening of a Fleet

**Due to key members not being online, some details were changed in the actual RP (You will spot them) This is the original Script**


Scene 1: Earth Space Dock.
Starting with all the fleet, Karlos gives the a brief up in Admiral Quinn's office.
- Karlos and Caolis will be taking a Shuttlecraft to engage in Diplomatic Relations with the Romulans. -- Commander Z'Hai will have her ship the Andor as a tactical escort, keeping a transporter lock on both diplomats. The U.S.S. Steamrunner (NPC) will also be escorting us, engaging the lead ship if Diplomacy fails. -- Whilst this is happening Doctor Jik'tun will be commanding the Arch-Royal with his own ship standing by on it's flank for support. -- During this time DO NOT try to contact our ships.

-In the meantime the rest of the fleet will be boarding Starbase 39 and begin setting up a base of operations. Ensign Monroe will take on the role of Quatermaster for this mission. He will oversee the set up on the station.

Scene 2/3: The fleet move out/Diplomatic Relations.
Everyone heads to Starbase 39. The Diplomacy Party will move into dead space to act out their mission as Monroe leads the stations boarding party set up their operations.

The diplomacy will take some time. of arguments (Abe to play as the Romulan Ambassador during this time)
The romulans agree to a cease-fire, however a squadren opens fire on the station. The shuttle is then tractored to the enemy ship. Z'Hai's transporters can't get through, The Steamrunner targets their generator, getting the shuttle free. Before it's fired on Z'Hai beams them out. - The Steamrunner is critically hit and the Arch-Royal beams out survivors before all ships set course for the station.

Scene 4: Boarding Parties
Monroe will have moved all members to the rear of the station. Here we will defend it and push out to eliminate the remaining romulans.
Karlos is hit in the torso, threatening damage to his symbiont.
Z'Hai takes command now as fleets senior tactical officer. Retaking the station. Upon checking data she finds the Romulans have downloaded high priority (encrypted) data. Caolis, as head of Diplomacy (And as no other officer has been stated) takes over all command of the fleet in Karlos' medical state.

Scene 5: Under her command
Caolis now has to ensure all operations continue.
She commands Jordan (As chief engineer) to begin making repairs to the station. (Deligate none essential members at this point to work under his command.)
Caolis, Doc, Z'Hai and Karlos beging medical RP as Jordan and Co do repair RP (Monroe will then be my contact for GM ops in that area).

It all started on the bridge of the Arch-Royal. Karlos met with fleet members; Monroe, Xiri, Rose, Z'Hai, Horagen and Jordan Baker. The plan was simple. They would form up and move out as a convoy along secure trading routes. Once at Starbase 39 Arch-Royal (Karlos), Andor (Z'Hai) and Steamrunner (NPC-Redshirt) would split off from the rest of the fleet to engage in diplomatic relations with the Romulans. - While this is happening, Monroe would lead the rest of the fleet to 39. Here he would set up a command post and place senior officers in selected stations.

Everything went to plan, however the Romulan diplomats didn't show. Z'Hai conducted a series of scans in the area, eventually finding warp traces of their ships. It was at this point 4 Romulan ships decloaked and attacked. The Steamrunner was hit bad getting a warp core breach and exploading, taking down the lead romulan ship with it.
The romulans then began boarding the station. Karlos and Z'Hai beamed on to the station to help repel the enemy forces as their ships dealt with the battle outside. Karlos had the fleet pull back to the Ops room, forming a 'base line' and having them advance on the enemy doing fire team 'fire and moment' Team One; consisting of Monroe, Xiri and Rose - would advance ahead as team two; Karlos, Z'Hai, Jordan and Horagen would give them cover fire. Team One would then go firm as team Two advances.

Both teams advance to the transporter room where they split. Team One stopped enemy reinforcements as team Two cleared the upper walk way. Once they thought it was clear, Karlos took a hit to the Abdomen, threatening damage to his Symbiont. Z'Hai commenced first aid on Karlos and he came too with mild memory loss. Command was then given to Z'Hai since Karlos was no longer fit to command under medical regulations.

Karlos then beamed to the Arch-Royal to conduct tests on himself; results are restricted though Karlos appears to show signs of recovery.

The rest of the fleet remain in the area of SB 39, securing the area, finishing repairs and completing the set up of their new Command post.

--Episode 1 Concluded. Feedback may now be posted below--

Let me know how you think it went. What parts did you like (So we can include more of that stuff) What parts didn't you like (So we can avoid it in future).
What else would have made this episode better for you personally?

All feedback will be taken in and will help future episodes to be even more enjoyable for the individuals.

Not sure if this should be in reply or as a PM.
I thought the episode went great.

Thing's that should have been different:

• Monroe being in charge, I balls'd it up

Thing's that were AWESOME:

• The two team push back of the Roms.

Haha, you did fine! Everyone was put into stations and it went pretty smoothly. Don't worry about it

Glad to hear you enjoyed it though ^^

Things that could have been different

I would have liked RP with the Romulans, but I understand that the players had RL issues...no biggie there.

I still don't understand why Orion put Z in command, there were officers senior to her present...and Im pretty sure I bollocked it up a bit (no dogs involved). lol

Things that were awesome

I really liked how the whole RP group continued after the episode and stayed true to the spirit of the RP you set up...Monroe was awesome too.

I have to agree with Monroe, the Romulan push back was epic!

I agree with you there, It'd have been great to get some of the Romulan RP in there, would really have made that part of the RP much more interesting...

Out of everyone I think I've spent more time with yourself and Monroe, that means he has more trust in the two of them. He's also seen Z's abilities first hand and saw her work under pressure. She was a good choice.

Thanks for the feedback ^^